Sam rests his case

“What a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive.”

Sam had often thought about the words his grandmother used to whisper to him, time and time again – often whilst he’d lay with his head upon her lap as she ran her frail fingers through his scraggly mop of blonde hair.

Many moons had passed since those prepubescent days. Business meetings had replaced after-school kick-abouts, glasses of wine usurped juice cartons and the train window had become his grandma’s lap. He wore his hair differently now; all heavily gelled and styled. She wouldn’t have approved.

The train tracks faltered and Sam’s head was displaced from the cold glass with a startling bump. He looked down at the pile of papers in his lap and began to build his next defence.


A piece inspired by the Monday Finish The Story Challenge. Click here to find out more!

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Responses to “Sam rests his case”

  1. Sonya

    Great piece of flash! ‘She wouldn’t have approved’ is a great line – I am sure it’s not just the hair she’d not have approved off.

    1. MrBinks

      Thanks, and thank you for reading.

  2. alphabetstory

    Good use of the prompt. A lawyer with secrets.

    1. MrBinks

      Thanks for reading.

  3. Sally Stackhouse

    A lovely story – an adult still using the memories from his childhood to good effect.

    1. MrBinks

      Thanks, really pleased you enjoyed it.

  4. ansumani

    Good story with the right touch of nostalgia.

    1. MrBinks

      Thanks.

  5. thecoastalquill

    Well done. He learned lessons from his grandmother but chooses to weave webs anyway. Nice. Loved the comparisons…. very lyrical.

    1. MrBinks

      Muchos gracias.

  6. babso2you

    Grandma was a wise old woman. I hope that he wins his case! Thank you for contributing to the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. See you next time! Be well… ^..^

    1. MrBinks

      But you don’t know what his case is! 😉
      Thanks for reading.

  7. Priceless Joy

    Perfect prompt for a lawyer story! Loved it. 🙂

    1. MrBinks

      Those web weaving weasels 😉

      1. Priceless Joy

        LOL! Yes

  8. Courtney Wright

    Awesome! I loved my grandmother and received very wise advice as well. Great story! 🙂

    1. MrBinks

      Thanks for reading (and glad you could).

      1. Courtney Wright

        You bet! Meeee too!! 😉

  9. J Hardy Carroll

    Nicely done.

    1. MrBinks

      Thanks.

  10. phylor

    What! Lawyers weave those kinds of deceitful webs too 🙂 Great take on the prompt. Enjoyed.

  11. draliman

    Hmm, is there some sort of link between lawyers and lying here… 🙂
    Great story, nice take on the prompt!

    1. MrBinks

      Why thank you.

  12. loricarlson66

    great nostalgic piece filled with intrigue! love it!

    1. MrBinks

      High praise, many thanks. Please do take a flick through some of my others, you might like them too.

      1. loricarlson66

        you are most welcome! and I sure will… might be a day or so as I have a lot of projects and reading to do… but I will definitely be back for more!

  13. Susan Langer

    It takes a special kid of person to defend the “guilty.” Good story. 🙂

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