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Tony and the waiter

Tony checked his watch for the 3rd time that minute, then glanced at the door.
He was used to waiting, but that normally involved his wife.

“Would you like another, sir?”

For a beat he wondered what the waiter knew, before realising his glass was again empty.
He nodded and watched as the bottle glugged bravery into his glass.

“Does sir know what he wants?”

Tony’s eyes darted from the glass in his hand, to the door, and up to the questioning look from the waiter.

“You know what Fred, I think I do.” He cracked his knuckles.
“Check, please!”


Listen to me read it, if you like.

Well hello there, it’s been a bit of a while since I’ve taken part in Friday Fictioneers. It’s not for the want of trying, I can tell you. Often a Wednesday would roll around and I’d think “Ah yes, Wednesday, the obvious day to do Friday Fictioneers.” And then some other bit of life would come gatecrashing those thoughts and I’d just not do it. But here I am and I’m going to bloody well hit publish and go find the link thing and all of that stuff that comes with it.

Thanks to Rochelle for hosting, and to Lisa Fox for the photo prompt.

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Responses to “Tony and the waiter”

  1. neilmacdon

    Welcome back. Good to read you again

  2. rochellewisoff

    Dear Mr. B.

    Good to see you back again and hear you read. You set the stage well.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  3. Sandra

    And just like that… a sense of direction emerges. Good one.

  4. granonine

    Smart choice. People who keep you waiting don’t care much about you.

  5. Tracey at Whatsfordinnerdoc.com and TraceyDelaplainMD.com

    Darn, I hope your character wasn’t waiting on my character who wasn’t brave enough to sit down for a blind date. I understand that Wednesday life gets in the way feeling. I disappear for months at a time. We know that we can always come back.
    Tracey

  6. Alicia Jamtaas

    Good to see you back! I am always early for any occasion. (Thanks, Dad.) People who run late make me crazy!

  7. Liz Young

    I can’t sympathise with a married man who’s been stood up by another date.

  8. athling2001

    So we know it’s not his wife he is waiting for. The plot thickens. He be best to just go home probably.

  9. msjadeli

    So well-constructed, with leaving just the right bits out; and read with just the right inflections. Mr. Bink, not sure if I was at FF when you wrote before but welcome back to FF and hope to see/hear you again.

    1. MrBinks

      Thank you for the lovely comment.

      1. msjadeli

        You’re welcome. And I do remember you (caffeine this morning must have worked.)

  10. Tannille

    Tells so much with so little. Time to move on.

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