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Fred has a nightmare

PHOTO PROMPT ยฉ Dale Rogerson

โ€œI said Iโ€™d do it!โ€ Fred woke with a start.

The list of jobs hung over his head like the sword of Maureencles, and now it was becoming nightmare fuel. As his eyes adjusted to the morning light, he saw his wifeโ€™s drooling face and shuddered.

Fred crept from the bed, shushing the creaking and cracking of knees and back as he wrestled with his worn slippers.

He walked past the 3 buckets at the top of the stairs, bypassed several framed photographs propped against a wall, stepped over the hole in the floor, and settled into his favourite chair.


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This little piece of flash fiction was written for Friday Fictioneers based on a photo prompt submitted by Dale Rogerson. Follow the group or join in by clicking here!

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Responses to “Fred has a nightmare”

  1. Neil MacDonald

    Fred is a man happy in himself and at peace with the world

  2. Sandra

    Loved the sword of Maureenecles. Damo would have been well impressed too.

    1. MrBinks

      I’m glad it worked, I was in two minds but I liked it! ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thank you for reading.

  3. Anita

    Whoever keeps buckets on the top of the stairs!

    Truly tough.

    Glad he could settle in his favourite chair finally! ๐Ÿ™‚ Nightmare ended well ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. granonine

    I’m wondering what was in those buckets.

    1. MrBinks

      They’re for the big hole in the roof (from the photo).

      1. granonine

        Ah. Well, those are rather huge holes!

  5. msjadeli

    I feel like a mouse in the corner watching every bit of this. First class writing, MrBinks.

  6. Bon Lee

    I could hear the creaking bones… and feel them, too. Great story.

  7. R.M. Carlson

    What a great story!

  8. Dale

    Poor Fred. Though, it’s great he has a place to sit and let his woes waft away… Nicely done!

  9. The Sicilian Storyteller

    That’s some to-do list. Might wanna put Maureen on the top of the list.

    Great read!

  10. James McEwan

    Come on Fred, that roof won’t fix itself. Then again a peaceful rest first is what he needs after his disturbed sleep.

  11. rochellewisoff

    Dear Mr. B,

    Methinks Fred is quite the procrastinator. Good one. I always enjoy your reading.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  12. Margaret

    Delightful. I’m cheering for Fred. Love the obstacle course he has to clamber over and through to reach his armchair. Fix that hole in the roof? Nah – tomorrow.

  13. thisobscurelife

    he better enjoy his time, until his wife wakes up!!

  14. Angela Adams

    I love how you took the many conflicting messages of the signs and turned it into to-do list and nightmare. Clever.

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