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Carol and I go for a walk

Itโ€™s funny how a sound or a smell can conjure up memories. That day it was a potent mix of salty sea air, the gentle cymbal crash of rolling waves and powdery sand between my toes as I walked barefoot.

I could hear them instructing each other from the dunes. A kite flying high. Elastic grins on their faces as they focussed on keeping the tussling eagle airborne. Consoling each other moments later, as the inevitable happened and it nosedived to the beach.

I felt Carol squeeze my hand.

โ€œTime to go,โ€ she said. โ€œElse the crabs will pinch you.โ€


Hey, Listen

It’s always a nice surprise to see one of my images picked for Friday Fictioneers. It’s funny timing for me as I have missed a few weeks and popped my head around the door today and thought โ€“ I know that snap! For anyone interested in more photos of that beach, check out my instagram.

This week I’ve been going through old posts as I’ve decided to start work on volume 2 of my short stories. Seeing how many times Rochelle has taken time out of her schedule to keep this routine going for all of us over the decades is quite something!

So I wanted to take a minute and shout “Thank you, Rochelle!” You keep us all engaged and feeling like we’re part of a community no matter where we are in the world. Keep up the great work.

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Responses to “Carol and I go for a walk”

  1. Neil MacDonald

    Almost, I was there

    1. MrBinks

      Thanks for reading.

  2. Sandra

    An evocative piece for an evocative photo. Well done with both.

    1. MrBinks

      Thank you very much.

  3. rochellewisoff

    Dear Peter,

    The beach is one of my favorite places to be. Not one beach in particular…any beach. ๐Ÿ˜‰ I have a houseful of shells to prove it in my landlocked part of the USA. Your story, your reading and the background noises made me happy. Thank you for the lovely photo…happy to see it lured you back. And thank you for the sweet shout out. It’s why I do what I do.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    1. MrBinks

      I’m glad it made you smile. Thanks for reading.

  4. Keith’s Ramblings

    Wonderfully descriptive, it was like I was at Camber Sands (my favourite beach) looking on!

    1. MrBinks

      I know it well. I spent many a weekend there with my family.

  5. Lisa or Li

    MrBinks, so you’re the photographer this week. Wonderful shot. Perfect story to go with it. You have my imagination going with it as to the specifics of what happened before to bring the memories back. Sounds like one of your parents was a “teacher” and not in a good way ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

  6. Prior…

    I really liked the sensory images and imaging the diving kite.

    Also, just curious about the name “Carol,” because we heard Vince Gilligan might. have a preference for this name as it appears in some of his shows

    1. MrBinks

      Ha! I hadn’t quite worked out why the name Carol came to me when writing this โ€“ย but we are watching Plurb1us, and it is almost Christmas, so perhaps subconsciously that crashed the party.

      Thanks for reading.

      1. Prior…

        Ah, yes Christmas carols and then Carol from the show. We are also watching Plurb1us and I am not really liking it – the actress that plays Carol is a little too dramatic for me – talented but…
        oh and was really impressed with the episode featuring the Paraguayan character, Manousos. That was so well done.

  7. gc1963

    Great pic. Beautiful description.

  8. patrickprinsloo

    A delightful assault on the senses.

    (Was the photo captured on film?)

    1. MrBinks

      Thank you.

      No, the photo wasn’t captured on film but the camera I use (a Fuji X series) definitely gives that impression. More photos here if you’re interested. https://www.instagram.com/p/DQwIetrjcMp

  9. James McEwan

    I enjoyed the visual sensation and peaceful mood.

  10. poetisatinta

    Peter – lovely photo and story to match ๐Ÿ™Œ

  11. thisobscurelife

    Great photo captures the light and shadows perfectly. And great storytelling with the memory and bringing it back to present.

  12. Chris Hall

    How lovely, really nicely done. I can hear this in my head!

  13. Violet Lentz

    Perfect bit of reality to accompany the photo.

  14. Nancy’s Notes ๐Ÿ–Š๏ธ๐ŸŽถ

    Lovely story, Mr. B, and a wonderful message of thanks to Rochelle.

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