Submitted as part of Friday Fictioneers in response the photo attached below. It’s a lot of fun trying to hit that 100 word mark. why not give it a go!
“Here we are.” John pulled the car over and pointed. Jane peered through the window and back to John.
“What do you think? It’s not much but the neighbours are real nice”.
Jane looked back through the window, her mouth agape.
“Well, do you want to come in?” his voice quivering with anticipation.
Many responses lined up in Jane’s head and as she filtered through them she continued to stare at the house they had driven 50 miles to reach.
Jane turned to John, looked him in the eyes and without missing a single beat replied, “What. The. Actual. Fuck?”
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