Crossroads

John chewed happily as he waited. Vine weed made a pleasant change to the usual diet of bluebottles, mosquitoes and other winged insects that made it into his grill.

Heโ€™d heard them argue, of course.

โ€œI know where weโ€™re going. Iโ€™ve been here before.โ€

โ€œYou told me youโ€™d been here with your folks, when you were 4. I hardly think that counts.โ€

โ€œWe should go left.โ€

โ€œWe should go right!โ€

โ€œItโ€™s definitely left.โ€

โ€œIโ€™m telling you we have to goโ€ฆโ€

Turns out, one needs to make a decision at a crossroads; especially one divided by several acres of barren land.


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This piece was submitted as part ofย Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. 1 photograph. 100 words. Sometimes over 100ย people taking part.

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Responses to “Crossroads”

  1. Sandra

    I think they’ve a couple of decisions to make. One relates to the direction in which they should steer the truck. I like John, he sounds like a nice truck. ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. rochellewisoff

    Dear Peter,

    Perhaps John should make the decision. ๐Ÿ˜‰

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  3. patriciaruthsusausan

    Peter, Well, that decision was made a wee bit late. ๐Ÿ˜€ Humorous and well written. ๐Ÿ™‚ —Susan

  4. Shailaja/ The Moving Quill

    This was so cute! What an appropriate name for a truck โค

  5. David Stewart

    John sounds like a contented soul. It sounds like the couple needs to invest in a GPS though. ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. liz young

    I’ve had conversations like that. A good, humerous story and you made it back to first slot!

  7. Properly Ridiculous

    I have not participated in Friday Fictioneers in a while – I’m happy I chose to this week. Being a very indecisive person, I felt right at home reading your interpretation of the prompt. Your take on it is unique! Love it. Good work ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. hugmamma

    Very wise words…very well conveyed, I might add.

  9. storydivamg

    Howdy, Peter! I shouldn’t think an engine would run well on vine weed, but maybe this is one of those new-fangled alternative-fuel vehicles. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Creative take on the prompt.

    Cheers!
    Marie Gail

  10. patrickprinsloo

    A time to decide, definitely. Bravo.

  11. Anmol Rawat

    That was a good one !

    My Breakthrough

  12. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg)

    Ha. yes sometimes going straight ahead is not the best choice… ๐Ÿ™‚

  13. wmqcolby

    Like we always say, “If you come to a fork in the road, take it.”

  14. Ankush

    Whatever be their decision, it was a good decision on my part to come to your story ๐Ÿ™‚

    Cheers,
    Ankush..

  15. Amy Reese

    Oh yes, the barren stretch of land can be humbling. I hope they made the right choice! Creative take. Nice one!

  16. Nan Falkner

    Dear Mr. Binks – Great story – go right! Nan ๐Ÿ™‚

  17. lingeringvisions by Dawn

    Some folks bicker like that all the time and think itโ€™s normal. I think itโ€™s funny.

  18. AnnIsikArts

    I thought your muncher was a watching animal or something and was retelling the tale os what it had witnessed – the results of indecision at crossroads – the taking of ‘the road less travelled’ – over the fields! ๐Ÿ™‚

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