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Steve Drives Fast

RogerBultot

“I really wish you’d slow down.”

Sam regretted the words immediately as the torque of the engine pulled her stomach tight against the bucket seats.

“Steve!”

His knuckles were white at this point and his eyes looked dry as they fixated on the horizon, flitting occasionally as objects of distraction came and went in a blur.

Above the roar of the road Sam could swear she heard Steve’s teeth grinding.

“I’m not sorry,” she gulped. “I needed you but you hid. You didn’t answer. He did.”

“It’s yours.”

His gaze softened. His grip relaxed. Then, he let go.

“We’re done.”


Today’s photo offers a sense of speed and frustration to me. In fact, as good an image as it is I find it hard to look at as it pulses and feels erratic. Nice work, Roger.

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Responses to “Steve Drives Fast”

  1. James McEwan

    Just got to get something off his chest and out of his system. Anger is a dangerous emotion that needs careful control.

  2. Neil MacDonald

    Beautifully crafted

  3. Dale

    Oh this is great, Mr. B! I could feel it all.

  4. Laurie Bell

    Well that’s an unexpected end. Nicely done. You could feel the reckless speed in this one.

  5. plaridel

    sounds reasonable to me. 🙂

  6. rochellewisoff

    Dear Mr. B,

    A lot of anger in this story. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  7. Brenda’s Thoughts

    Hopefully, he slowed down before he let go. So much tension. Nicely done!

  8. Angela Adams

    Beautifully written. Anger and vehicles are a terrifying combination; you had my stomach twisting as I read!

  9. Dawn M. Miller

    This is almost poetic.

  10. msjadeli

    “It’s yours.” Is this him deciding not to crash them both because she told the truth as she saw it? I’m glad he’s decided it’s over. Richly layered narrative in just a few words, with good imagery.

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