X Marks The Spot

A pirate that suffers from sea sickness, it turns out, is no pirate at all.

Captain Pigeonbeard had long since swapped the stormy seas for life in the clouds. It was fair to say, the change had been much kinder on his constitution.

His crew was initially rather miffed at the changes in circumstance. Waving a cutlass around a cockpit was frowned upon, you see. Deck swabbing and knot-tying were now quite useless trades. The guy that manned the crow’s nest had been laid off, of course. His position deemed irrelevant, now they all had a bird’s eye view.

view-from-the-plane

 


This piece was submitted as part of Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. 1 photograph. 100 words. Sometimes over 100 people taking part.

Responses to “X Marks The Spot”

  1. karin

    Brill thanks for making me chuckle

    1. MrBinks

      Thanks, Karin 🙂

  2. wmqcolby

    That’s what happens, all right, when things change. Cute story, Binks.

    1. MrBinks

      Thanks for reading!

  3. helenmidgley

    Another chucklefest 😉

    1. MrBinks

      Ch.ch.chuckle Vision… Cheers, Midgers.

  4. Courtney Wright

    Brilliant Mr. Binks….simply brilliant! 🙂

    1. MrBinks

      How kind, thank you.

  5. aliciajamtaas

    What a glorious take on the prompt. From pirate to – well, to what? Loved this!

    1. MrBinks

      Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

  6. Horus

    “Pirates of the …”

    Am sure we would be seeing likes of them soon !

    1. MrBinks

      🙂

  7. Sandra

    Oh the images this conjured up… 🙂

    1. MrBinks

      Thanks for reading, Sandra. I’m off now to read yours!

  8. rochellewisoff

    Dear Peter,

    Charming take on the prompt. I can envision this band of pirates on a plane. Clever.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  9. dmmacilroy

    Dear Mr. Binks,

    A whimsical post-modern tale of adventure on the high seas…oh, wait…the high airways. Yeah, that’s the ticket. Well done.

    Aloha,

    Doug

  10. patriciaruthsusan

    Peter, I can just see the title of the film, “Pirates of the Skys.” Maybe Johnny Depp will be available. I guess a layed-off pirate can always find work as there seems to still be piracy happening. They can’t put in for unemployment compensation though. Funny story and well written. 😀 —Susan

  11. Snow’s Fissures and Fractures

    Very clever and imaginative. Too bad your pirates didn’t read Stardust. 🙂

  12. Maree Gallop

    Ahh, loved that one. So clever and funny!

  13. storydivamg

    Flying so high does make those elusive X’s a lot easier to find though, doesn’t it?

    Cheers!
    Marie Gail

  14. liz young

    Very funny. Clever too!

  15. The Writer’s Village

    I, too, see Johnny Depp carousing around once again like a drunk Keith Richards – or maybe How about Leslie Nielson from the original Airplane going toe-to-toe with Depp.

  16. Nan Falkner

    Dear Mr. Binks – you are so perfectly clever! I love reading your stories! Thanks, Nan 😉

  17. Preeti

    I loved your story! Such a unique take on the photo prompt!

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