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Michael feels fine

The sky was on fire. Michael sat on his hands; there was nothing he could do.

Bill perched beside him on the wall, his knuckles blooded.

“How do you feel?” he asked.

Michael looked up as another cloud burst violently into flames.

“Fine,” he said calmly.

Bill was confused.

“Fine?”

“I feel fine.”

Bill had been angry all week. The news hitting him from every angle. He’d alienated himself from everyone he knew. He had refused to believe. He’d prayed to a god he’d never thought about and cried himself dry for days.

Michael reached out and held Bill close.

Hey, listen!

That’s great it starts with an earthquake, birds and snakes and aeroplanes…

Written as part of Friday Fictioneers to a photograph submitted by Rochelle. Click here to read more stories or to post your own!

Responses to “Michael feels fine”

  1. Neil MacDonald

    Perhaps, judging from Bill’s blooded knuckles, all he needed was to fight back

  2. rochellewisoff

    Dear Mr. B,

    I was told in therapy that “fine” is not a feeling but a cop out. Well written with much story between the lines.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  3. ceayr

    If it was good enough for The Beatles, it’s good enough for Michael!

  4. Sandra

    Fine is ok. Few people want to know the ins and outs of your mood anyway.

  5. poetisatinta

    I love how the imagery symbolises an impending crisis that mirrors Bill’s internal turmoil – a well written piece🙌

  6. Lisa or Li

    I love the riff off of the R.E.M. song! I’m glad they have each other ❤

  7. David Stewart

    Sounds like we had similar ideas this week. This picture looks like some sort of apocalypse, to be sure.

  8. Bernadette Braganza

    It’s nice they had each other at the end.

  9. Dale

    Michael is the calm in Bill’s storm. A lovely write, Mr. Binks.

  10. plaridel

    i suppose all he needs is someone to be around, to see him, and to hold his hand.

  11. James McEwan

    Sometimes there is nothing you can do but hold your head high and carry on.

  12. Nandini Deka

    i’m g;ad he had michael to hold him….

  13. goroyboy

    Yikes! “Clouds bursting “

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